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Kesterelnight

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Warriors-of-the-Moon

INFORMATION

Name: Kestrelkit/paw/night
Gender: Tom
Age: born in 2012, January 10. 5 years
Rank: Medicine cat
Clan: Storm Clan
Breed: Pixebob

Personality:
Kestrelnight is grouchy and uneasy about violence. He is stubborn and arrogant. But has a kind heart for the weak and sickly. He snaps, growls and smacks when cats aren't doing what he tells them to.
But he is also filled with sadness and longing(see history)

Relationships:
WIP

History:
KITHOOD
Kestrelkit and his sister, Finchkit where the odd kits in the clan, their mother, Lily who had died of blood loss after her kitting had many strange physical attributes, like extra toes and she was large with a bob tail.
The kits where bullied and ignored by the clan born kits, and it wasn't the kind of life that the two siblings would become best friends either, as Finchkit was born with many problems, one of them being it was very hard for her to digest food, and she was little and too weak or tired to play. So Kestrelkit played alone, or with the apprentices, who would try to teach him some battle moves. But, he was a strong kit, and never let his loneliness show, he was quite the humorous cat as well, always making his tiny sister giggle and smile. It wasn't until the day before their ceremony that Finchkit died.
APPRENTICESHIP
Kestrelpaw was never the same after his beloved sister pasted away, he was given his apprentice name but given a few days off to grieve. He never left his nest, even to eat, his den mates where the same cats he had lived with his whole life and no one really cared, except for a friendly grey she-cat who brought him food every day and talked with him. His mentor, who was the leader at the time, Fawnstar coaxed him out to a few training lessons before he noticed he utterly failed at every lesson, tripping or making too much noise, his claws would snag onto every leaf he walked over. He couldn't climb trees or hunt and wasn't a good fighter. He heard Fawnstar talking to Harespring (the medicine cat) one night, on how she felt he needed to go a different rout.
Cringing, Kestrelpaw stalked into Fawnstar's den the next day, early in the morning and screeched his heart's sadness and pain to her. He did not want to become a medicine cat. after a few minutes of awkward silence between them, Fawnstar tilted her head, and she told him that she had a dream, that a big black cat would be the next medicine cat.
MEDICINE CAT
As Kestrelnight stood beside Fawnstar's dying body, silent he licked her, "I am so so so sorry I can't do anything to save you, Fawnstar..." Fawnstar shook her head, her voice as raspy as if she had a mouthful of sand, "Oh Kestrelnight... I am the one who should be sorry... I told a great lie, one that has changed you, and your whole life." She looked into his eyes, "You where never supposed to be-" Her eyes rolled and went dull as her body went limp and a single breath was visible in the freezing weather.
Kestrelnight stood up, he pressed his muzzle into Fawnstar's fur and whispered, "Its okay... I forgive you, may you leap up to starclan in peace now." He turned his head painfully away from the medicine cat and left the den, flinching at every step.

 


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Warriors-of-the-Moon
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This looks good. Can you copy and paste it and edit the blank refs to have the desc.? That would be great.